Above is the final film, edited by Alicia. After gaining feedback for the last draft, Alicia and I decided to make a few changes to the film, changing the order of a few shots, and deleting a few, to make it flow better and seem more realistic. Overall, I think Alicia edited it well, and it looks professional.
We decided to move the credits around the screen, so they weren’t statically in the left hand corner of each shot. Also, towards the end we changed James’ writing in the journal shots as we felt three different shots of the same thing was excessive. Furthermore, in the last draft, a short shot was shown where Alicia and Jasmin were visible, which made our film feel less professional, therefore this needed to be cut out. We didn’t need to refilm any shots however, which was fortunate.
Alice Dew
Mitchell is a year 11, currently studying at the same school as I am. He is grade 8 on piano, and has a great interest in organs, often attending organ meetings and playing in churches. He also accompanies most school music events, and is sitting his GCSE music in June. We thought that getting a second opinion on the piece would be a good idea, as he would pick out bad and good points and acts as a form of judgement to the composition.

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